Finally, I am going to share a meaningful piece of advice on application essays. This is something I noticed only now, after the scholarship results, but I realise that it helped me get admitted to INSEAD in the first place. So here goes – honesty is good. Use honesty in your essays. That’s it; lesson over.
All in all, I wrote a bunch of essays for four different scholarships. One of these I didn’t care much about, because the other scholarship looked more promising. But at the end I thought, what the hell, better to maximise my chances, so why not apply for the fourth as well? So I had this set of essays for three scholarships – very polished, very carefully constructed, positive sounding pieces of prose. And I had the essay for the fourth one, where I just told whoever is reading these things what I really thought about the subject matter. As it turned out, I had a lot to say, some of it not very nice. It sounded kinda angry even if passionate. To make things worse, I never showed that essay to anyone. In short, definitely not what I’d write if I really, really relied on that scholarship.
In the end – you guessed it – the risky essay won me a scholarship, all the others yielded were polite e-mails saying ‘your application was not successful’.
Draw your own conclusions from this. Personally I’d like to think that sometimes admissions people tend to reward honest applicants and see the polished rubbish for what it is – rubbish. I’d not go as far as to advise everyone to write angry rants in the application form, but sometimes being honest works.
October 9, 2009 at 12:38 am
Hey BS Applicant,
Great post, and very ironic–you are after all the ‘BS’ guy, but are advocating no BS. :)
Seriously though, really appreciate seeing this. I think that a lot of MBA applicants go overboard with ‘polishing’ their application essays, which oftentimes has the result of making their message seem less than honest. This post is a good wake-up call to these folks.
Keep up the good work.
Eric Bahn
Founder, Beat The GMAT
October 9, 2009 at 7:02 am
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October 9, 2009 at 7:27 am
[...] McCombs ‘10 Paragon2Pieces wanted to go to India for her global trip, but worried that demand was going to be too high. Marshall ‘10 Andrew, like many other second years over the last few months, felt a need to dispell the myth that the second year of b-school is a breeze. Darden ‘10 Mechanigal went to a U2 concert. McCombs ‘10 Metal was quite pleased when someone was able to spell his name right on the first try.Darden’ 10 JulyDream considered what has to give when you want everything. INSEAD ‘10 OutofmyJeans won a questionable key chain. Melbourne ‘10 Ronjon told ‘you’ about ‘your’ birthday and the cake that came with. INSEAD ‘10 BSApplicant found that honesty in your essays can really be the best policy. [...]
October 9, 2009 at 7:27 am
[...] McCombs ‘10 Paragon2Pieces wanted to go to India for her global trip, but worried that demand was going to be too high. Marshall ‘10 Andrew, like many other second years over the last few months, felt a need to dispell the myth that the second year of b-school is a breeze. Darden ‘10 Mechanigal went to a U2 concert. McCombs ‘10 Metal was quite pleased when someone was able to spell his name right on the first try.Darden’ 10 JulyDream considered what has to give when you want everything. INSEAD ‘10 OutofmyJeans won a questionable key chain. Melbourne ‘10 Ronjon told ‘you’ about ‘your’ birthday and the cake that came with. INSEAD ‘10 BSApplicant found that honesty in your essays can really be the best policy. [...]
October 9, 2009 at 8:05 am
[...] McCombs ‘10 Paragon2Pieces wanted to go to India for her global trip, but worried that demand was going to be too high. Marshall ‘10 Andrew, like many other second years over the last few months, felt a need to dispell the myth that the second year of b-school is a breeze. Darden ‘10 Mechanigal went to a U2 concert. McCombs ‘10 Metal was quite pleased when someone was able to spell his name right on the first try.Darden’ 10 JulyDream considered what has to give when you want everything. INSEAD ‘10 OutofmyJeans won a questionable key chain. Melbourne ‘10 Ronjon told ‘you’ about ‘your’ birthday and the cake that came with. INSEAD ‘10 BSApplicant found that honesty in your essays can really be the best policy. [...]
October 10, 2009 at 8:33 am
It’s possible that the other scholarships
(that you didn’t get) were more competitive than the one whose essys you were angry-honest in.
It’s plausible.
October 11, 2009 at 10:18 am
The only solid fact in the whole story is, one angry/honest essay did win an INSEAD scholarship. Everything else is speculation.